Comments on: Available Darkness: Chapter 12

By: Available Darkness: Chapter 15

Available Darkness: Chapter 15 — Sun, 23 Aug 2009 00:12:47 +0000

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By: Marc

Marc — Mon, 13 Jul 2009 14:49:10 +0000

I missed my Friday sitting, stupid brother. Why did he choose this year to get married? And why choose this weekend for his stag do? Doesn't he know Available Darkness is airing in my local feed-reader? I was actually contemplating skipping this until Friday. It's a testament to your writing and storytelling skills that I couldn't resist. At the same time it really is incredibly skillful how the two of you can take something as warm, life-giving and essential as the sun and turn it into someone's living nightmare of pain, agony and death. Marc’s last blog post..SEO 101.4 | Competition Analysis

By: Lori Hoeck

Lori Hoeck — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 15:52:01 +0000

"The silence of dusk was shattered by a gunshot that was half in his mind and half an echo in the distance." Nice, the two scenes melded into one. It's fun to be so absorbed by a story that my critic -- the one that often says, "I could have written this better" -- can't say a word, but can only sit down beside me, strap in, and go along for this most satisfying ride. Lori Hoeck’s last blog post..Getting to know your intuition

By: Rosa

Rosa — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 14:01:04 +0000

“I’m coming, Abigail,”....oh wow *sigh* Rosa’s last blog post..Porque yo amo a Michael – Because I love Michael

By: janice

janice — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 10:38:18 +0000

I can’t take much more of this. You guys are the gods behind this story – this blog, right? Can’t you hurry up and get to the “…and they both lived happily – and healthily – ever after.” bit?! I can’t believe I’ve started my weekend with crispy fried vampire flesh – I can still smell it!!

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By: Trina

Trina — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 04:35:45 +0000

I swear my heart races right along with this story. Love, love, love the pace. Just enough twists and connectivity to keep my reaching for next week.
I was wondering if John could survive exposure if he was covered…