Comments on: Available Darkness: Chapter 28

By: The Bug

The Bug — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 23:34:38 +0000

I’ve dreamed about the crashing toward an unknown doom too – so this taps into those fears – good stuff!

By: Lori Hoeck

Lori Hoeck — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 19:21:36 +0000

As Trina writes, the visuals are powerful!

“… as something else, far darker and lonelier wrapped itself around his mind. He felt himself falling into a void, his body finding velocity as it crashed towards an unknown doom.”

You do a good job taking readers minds and anticipation to this same place.

By: Marylin

Marylin — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 23:44:59 +0000

Oh wonderful! Can’t wait till the next installement… as usual.

By: Trina

Trina — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 20:44:44 +0000

Terrifying, juicy and such stunning visuals. The idea of John’s feeding giving him both pleasure and pain provides quite the picture indeed.

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