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	<title>Comments on: Available Darkness: Chapter 29</title>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-29/comment-page-1/#comment-5934</link>
		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Nov 2009 17:45:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I LOVED this chapter. I got to enjoy it as both a writer and a reader, though as a reader first. I couldn&#039;t believe what was happening to Abigail. My throat and nose were in an angry battle for my breath. In fact, if my nose were any smaller I might already be dead!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I LOVED this chapter. I got to enjoy it as both a writer and a reader, though as a reader first. I couldn&#8217;t believe what was happening to Abigail. My throat and nose were in an angry battle for my breath. In fact, if my nose were any smaller I might already be dead!</p>
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		<title>By: David Wright</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-29/comment-page-1/#comment-5882</link>
		<dc:creator>David Wright</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Nov 2009 21:53:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;strong&gt;Author&#039;s Note:&lt;/strong&gt; Thank you for the comments and the emails. This chapter took forever to write. The ending gave me chills as it played out in my head. I don&#039;t want to give away what happens next, obviously, so forgive me for not getting into specifics. 

However, on the subject of death, I&#039;ve never been one to shy away from killing characters in my work. I drew a lot of criticism when I did a miscarriage storyline in my comic strip, Todd and Penguin. Nobody expected something so tragic in a lighthearted family-friendly comic. It was, I believe, the first, or one of the first storylines like that in webcomics. Though shortly after I did the story, a few other comics also killed characters, causing some readers to (perhaps rightly) accuse some comics of doing it for shock value. My story was sincere though, borne of an impending death in my wife&#039;s family that touched everyone. As an artist, I felt compelled to deal with those emotions in my work.

Though some authors consider it a violation of some unwritten contract with the readers that no matter what, certain people will make it out alive, I don&#039;t agree with that concept. I think you have to be true to the story and the characters. It&#039;s not just a matter of artistic integrity but one of self preservation as a writer. Readers will know the minute you&#039;re straying off the range.

To me, a story should be as realistic (well as realistic as a story about vampires can be) as possible and sometimes that includes tragedy or unhappy endings.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>Author&#8217;s Note:</strong> Thank you for the comments and the emails. This chapter took forever to write. The ending gave me chills as it played out in my head. I don&#8217;t want to give away what happens next, obviously, so forgive me for not getting into specifics. </p>
<p>However, on the subject of death, I&#8217;ve never been one to shy away from killing characters in my work. I drew a lot of criticism when I did a miscarriage storyline in my comic strip, Todd and Penguin. Nobody expected something so tragic in a lighthearted family-friendly comic. It was, I believe, the first, or one of the first storylines like that in webcomics. Though shortly after I did the story, a few other comics also killed characters, causing some readers to (perhaps rightly) accuse some comics of doing it for shock value. My story was sincere though, borne of an impending death in my wife&#8217;s family that touched everyone. As an artist, I felt compelled to deal with those emotions in my work.</p>
<p>Though some authors consider it a violation of some unwritten contract with the readers that no matter what, certain people will make it out alive, I don&#8217;t agree with that concept. I think you have to be true to the story and the characters. It&#8217;s not just a matter of artistic integrity but one of self preservation as a writer. Readers will know the minute you&#8217;re straying off the range.</p>
<p>To me, a story should be as realistic (well as realistic as a story about vampires can be) as possible and sometimes that includes tragedy or unhappy endings.</p>
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		<title>By: Tweets that mention Available Darkness: Chapter 29 -- Topsy.com</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-29/comment-page-1/#comment-5865</link>
		<dc:creator>Tweets that mention Available Darkness: Chapter 29 -- Topsy.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Nov 2009 23:13:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Blogger Dad and Blogger Dad, MichelleGillies. MichelleGillies said: @bloggerdad thank for latest Available Darkness http://bit.ly/1xL3Zv . As usual, I just want more. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Blogger Dad and Blogger Dad, MichelleGillies. MichelleGillies said: @bloggerdad thank for latest Available Darkness <a href="http://bit.ly/1xL3Zv" rel="nofollow">http://bit.ly/1xL3Zv</a> . As usual, I just want more. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Sarah</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Nov 2009 23:10:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow!  You made me cry at work. You bastards!

Great chapter, except for the ending. She better not die!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow!  You made me cry at work. You bastards!</p>
<p>Great chapter, except for the ending. She better not die!</p>
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		<title>By: Trina</title>
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		<dc:creator>Trina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Nov 2009 16:25:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There were a couple times as I was about to hit pg dwn, I was hoping for more, and there was..... thanks for the great tension today.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There were a couple times as I was about to hit pg dwn, I was hoping for more, and there was&#8230;.. thanks for the great tension today.</p>
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		<title>By: The Bug</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-29/comment-page-1/#comment-5845</link>
		<dc:creator>The Bug</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Nov 2009 16:23:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Seriously - this is an evil thing leaving us with that last sentence.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Seriously &#8211; this is an evil thing leaving us with that last sentence.</p>
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		<title>By: Marylin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Marylin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Nov 2009 23:53:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh no, not Abigail, she can&#039;t really die! *sigh*</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh no, not Abigail, she can&#8217;t really die! *sigh*</p>
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