Comments on: Available Darkness: Chapter 30

By: tina

tina — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 08:52:08 +0000

Thanks again for the great read. I skipped reading for three weeks so I’ll have enough to read when I come back Can’t wait for the next chapter!

By: Trina

Trina — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 03:37:25 +0000

Fitting, very fitting. Would have liked to see a bit of mind connection occuring between the two though.

By: Sarah

Sarah — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 01:39:34 +0000

This story has more suspense and soul in its relatively few chapters than the entire Twilight series of books! Another brilliant chapter, gentlemen. The only problem I have is that I hate waiting a week to find out what happens next. Any chance we can get two chapters a week?

By: The Bug

The Bug — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 15:39:44 +0000

Now, why, when I know I’m reading a vampire story, did this ending not even occur to me? Sheesh I’m slow! Once again I read it at lightening speed because I wanted to see what happened next. Good job!