Comments on: Available Darkness: Chapter 31 http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-31/ Inspiration, freelance writing and illustration to make your blog great Wed, 18 Apr 2012 04:36:51 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: The Bug http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-31/comment-page-1/#comment-6306 The Bug Sun, 29 Nov 2009 16:57:31 +0000 http://collectiveinkwell.com/?p=1013#comment-6306 Excellent chapter - I love the big reveal at the end & I can't wait to hear about how Jack couldn't remember any of this... BTW - I think the line should read "Though he was just a child himself..." Excellent chapter – I love the big reveal at the end & I can’t wait to hear about how Jack couldn’t remember any of this…

BTW – I think the line should read “Though he was just a child himself…”

]]> By: Trina http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-31/comment-page-1/#comment-6263 Trina Sat, 28 Nov 2009 00:52:31 +0000 http://collectiveinkwell.com/?p=1013#comment-6263 nice reveal nice reveal

]]> By: David Wright http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-31/comment-page-1/#comment-6252 David Wright Fri, 27 Nov 2009 21:18:30 +0000 http://collectiveinkwell.com/?p=1013#comment-6252 <strong>Author's Note:</strong> This chapter was one of my favorites to write as it allowed us to delve deeper into Jack's back story and his character. The themes of love, familial duty and, of course, love lost, run deep in this story and I enjoy slowly revealing the layers one chapter at a time. I'm still not sure how all of this will read as a whole for the book, though we are trying to be conscious of the needs of both the story as a whole and in its serial format. My other favorite part, of course, is the big reveal at the end, and the mystery deepens. HUGE thanks to Sean who really made this chapter shine with his edits. as always, thank you for reading, david Author’s Note: This chapter was one of my favorites to write as it allowed us to delve deeper into Jack’s back story and his character. The themes of love, familial duty and, of course, love lost, run deep in this story and I enjoy slowly revealing the layers one chapter at a time. I’m still not sure how all of this will read as a whole for the book, though we are trying to be conscious of the needs of both the story as a whole and in its serial format.

My other favorite part, of course, is the big reveal at the end, and the mystery deepens.

HUGE thanks to Sean who really made this chapter shine with his edits.

as always, thank you for reading,
david

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