Comments on: Available Darkness: Chapter 36 http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-36/ Inspiration, freelance writing and illustration to make your blog great Thu, 06 Oct 2011 16:52:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: David Wright http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-36/comment-page-1/#comment-7805 David Wright Sun, 17 Jan 2010 11:27:12 +0000 http://collectiveinkwell.com/?p=1148#comment-7805 The Bug and Trina - Thank you for commenting, as always. We appreciate the feedback immensely. Yes, Abigail has endured a lot. The Bug and Trina – Thank you for commenting, as always. We appreciate the feedback immensely. Yes, Abigail has endured a lot.

]]> By: Trina http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-36/comment-page-1/#comment-7789 Trina Sat, 16 Jan 2010 06:25:36 +0000 http://collectiveinkwell.com/?p=1148#comment-7789 The two pieces worked really well together. Abigail sure has endured enough crap for multiple lifetimes, eh? Likeing the angel connection... The two pieces worked really well together. Abigail sure has endured enough crap for multiple lifetimes, eh? Likeing the angel connection…

]]> By: The Bug http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-36/comment-page-1/#comment-7784 The Bug Fri, 15 Jan 2010 19:44:41 +0000 http://collectiveinkwell.com/?p=1148#comment-7784 I appreciated the extra chapter - I was glad to see more! I really liked this one - the way it was written & the possibilities it opens. I'm interested by the fact that John was able to live as a regular person (apparently?) at one point. And, angel wings? VERY intriguing! I appreciated the extra chapter – I was glad to see more!

I really liked this one – the way it was written & the possibilities it opens. I’m interested by the fact that John was able to live as a regular person (apparently?) at one point. And, angel wings? VERY intriguing!

]]> By: David Wright http://collectiveinkwell.com/available-darkness-chapter-36/comment-page-1/#comment-7776 David Wright Fri, 15 Jan 2010 05:45:08 +0000 http://collectiveinkwell.com/?p=1148#comment-7776 <strong>Author's Notes:</strong>Yeah, this one is a bit long. But since those of you who have commented or emailed usually say you want more, well I guess it won't be seen as too wordy. Sean and I debated whether or not to split this into two chapters. The break would have occurred at either where John hugs Abigail and all is right with the world, or just prior to the start of Part Two. While it was tempting to have an extra chapter in the bank ready to go for next week, I felt that this particular segment works best as a whole. Feel free to comment below on either this chapter or the story in whole. As always, thank you for reading, David Wright Author’s Notes:Yeah, this one is a bit long. But since those of you who have commented or emailed usually say you want more, well I guess it won’t be seen as too wordy.

Sean and I debated whether or not to split this into two chapters. The break would have occurred at either where John hugs Abigail and all is right with the world, or just prior to the start of Part Two.

While it was tempting to have an extra chapter in the bank ready to go for next week, I felt that this particular segment works best as a whole.

Feel free to comment below on either this chapter or the story in whole.

As always, thank you for reading,
David Wright

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