Kelly MccannlisWow! I can’t believe I’m guest posting at the Collective Inkwell.

I thought it was pretty exciting when Mr. Platt let me guest post over at Writer Dad on Wednesday, but the Inkwell is even better. I’m usually not even allowed to read this site because my dad said that sometimes it’s inappropriate. I tried to tell him that was really only on Fridays and not even anymore since they moved their horror story to its own thingy, but then he asked me how I even knew about the story in the first place and then I had to leave the room.

Anyway, Mr. Platt said it might be kind of fun to publish something at the Inkwell since that’s where a bunch of other authors hang out. Then I said that I wasn’t really sure if that was a good idea and that I didn’t consider myself an author. I’ve only written the one book after all, and it hasn’t even really come out yet. Besides, I’m only in sixth grade.

“Did you write a book?” he said.

“Yes.”

“Then you’re an author.”

My mom gets really mad at me when I argue with grownups so I just said okay. Then I started to get excited.

I don’t want to be one of those writers who repeats themselves all the time, so I won’t talk about what the book is all about like I did at Writer Dad. Instead I’d like to talk about what I plan to do with the book since that’s probably what you’re more interested in anyway.

A couple of days ago I released my new book, Penny to a Million in a really pretty PDF and it’s available as a free download. I wrote all the words, of course, but I had Collective Inkwell do the book cover because whenever I try to draw something my sister Nicky makes fun of me. Making a book cover that a whole bunch of people are going to see would probably be like a million times worse.

I’m gonna put the book in print, probably in a couple months or so. But I’m giving the PDF to the first 1,000 people who want it. After that I’m going to charge like five bucks.

I read the thing I was supposed to read over at SmashWords, so next week I plan to get the book in a whole bunch of different formats and stuff. I hope to get it done quickly, but I’ll get in trouble if I finish it before I’m done with my science project. Our teacher gave us the prompt in September, but I haven’t even started mine, even though it’s due in March. My mom is trying not to get mad at me, but I think I’m pushing her.

Anyway, when I’m all done with SmashWords, then I’m going to do the podcast. Except I’m probably going to have Mr. Platt help me record since my voice has been a little squeaky lately.

Mr. Platt said I could come back and talk about what it was like to put the book on SmashWords and record the podcast, but he also said it was up to me. I might blog about it over at my site, but I haven’t decided. I have a lot on my plate and everything. Plus, there’s this girl I really like and I heard her tell her friend Wendy that she thought blogging was nerdy. I’m on Twitter though, if you want to follow me.

If the book does well, I’ll write another one because a LOT has happened so far in sixth grade.

If you want to be one of the people who gets to read my book for free, you can download it here.

Thanks for reading!

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“I’m an author, I don’t need to worry about SEO.”

Don’t worry. I used to think the same thing.

But if you’re writing online for anything more than a hobby, you do need to worry about SEO, authors included.

In case you don’t already know, SEO stands for search engine optimization. You know how Google has an answer for all our questions? Well, if you’re searching for an answer that a lot of other people are looking for as well, then chances are excellent the link you see at the top was written by someone who knows their SEO.

Whatever you’re writing, you probably want people to find you. This means you need to be using the same language that they are. Think of it as picking up the dialect of your ideal client or reader. Because you’re a writer, you might be thinking that altering your language to fit SEO is a bad thing.

Again, I was once there and I was wrong.

Blending SEO naturally into your copy is like building specific roads that will help lead your ideal reader directly to you.

Good news is, SEO is a lot simpler than you might imagine.

The purpose of optimizing your copy for search is to help Google (or other search engines) determine which sites are most suited to searcher needs. Search engines do this through a combination of analyzing the keywords in your copy, the title tags on the page, the organization of your internal linking and, most importantly, what others think of you (the quantity and quality of your incoming links).

For a more thorough explanation, read the SEO series on Copyblogger. If you’re not already subscribed to their free updates, you should be. You might not think of yourself as a copywriter, but if you’re trying to get known online, the time you spend reading their posts Monday through Friday might be the best 10 minutes you spend each day.

Because you are a writer, you already have an advantage over most people, even if you didn’t know what SEO meant until the top of this page. You’re a natural when it comes to language. You know how to articulate yourself well. SEO isn’t about stuffing a bunch of keywords into your copy, or gaming the system in any way. Google wants to please their searchers. As time passes, semantics will continue increase in importance. Again, you as a writer have a clear advantage.

With a little bit of help, you can easily express yourself in a way that pleases both Google and all extra visitors that find you with their help.

The better news is, if you’re an online writer using WordPress and either Thesis, Headway or the any theme with the SEO All in One Plugin, then there’s a brand new tool that just made your life a LOT easier. It’s called Scribe, and it is nothing short of remarkable. I’ve been using it for the last few weeks.

Scribe analyzes your copy. Then, a few seconds later it gives you a report along with a percentage grade for your copy. The report tells you what the search engines will think you’re writing about, then it suggests tweaks to improve your page based on SEO best practices.

It gets better.

I’ve been writing SEO copy for a while now, and scored a perfect 100% on every one of the first 10 pages I analyzed. Yet Scribe still helped me improve my copy by giving me keyword suggestions and a gentle nudge in the right direction.

Using Scribe is like having a hand to hold, helping you tweak your copy to SEO perfection.

There is a free version of Scribe as well as a paid one. The free version will allow you to analyze up to 5 pages each month. You can find out more here.

If you are making a living with your words, I cannot recommend this plugin enough. And if you don’t have a compatible WordPress theme, I can’t say enough nice things about Thesis. David and I have built a lot of sites over the last year and between its SEO friendly architecture, ease of customization (without having to code), and now Scribe, it could be the best $97 you could spend online.

If you have any specific questions about Scribe, I’m happy to answer them either by email or in the comments.

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story conflictThere was once a princess who lived happily ever after. The end.

Doesn’t make for much of a story, does it?

Yet, some authors are writing stuff just like that. Only they’re taking 400 pages to do it. YAWN.

Think about all the great stories you’ve read and the unforgettable movies you‘ve seen. No matter the genre, they all have one thing in common—conflict.

Without conflict, there is no urgency. Without urgency, there is no compelling reason to keep turning the pages.

Twist the vise and pages will turn. Build the tension as a symphony builds to a swell.

Your hero needs conflict. Conflict can come from a number of sources, whether it be physical (in the form of other people or the environment), emotional, sexual, or even internal. The best way to provide conflict is by constantly giving your protagonist barriers to cross, boundaries to crush and hurdles to jump.

Swing the scythe, tighten the noose, drop the grand piano. Do everything you can to bring pain to your hero and exhilaration to your reader.

But it’s not enough to throw barrier after barrier at your characters. You must also make their pain relatable to your reader. You must either find a way to make the reader understand what the hero is feeling or experience the pain right along with them.

This means you must ground their conflict in a shade of reality.

Don’t get me wrong, you can have a purple dragon soaring through green skies on her way to a land made of mushrooms and chocolate, but if the rider on that dragon’s back has nothing in common with the reader, your book might end up on the nightstand moonlighting as a coaster.

Fantastic and unrealistic are not mutually exclusive.

Did you ever read Spiderman?

readers clung to Peter Parker because he was someone they could relate to

Spiderman is one of the most memorable, recognizable and popular superheroes of all time. His character was an immediate breath of fresh air from the moment Marvel Comics introduced him in 1962. It wasn’t because of his cool powers or his flashy suit, though. No, readers clung to Peter Parker because he was someone they could relate to, a high school outcast who didn’t fit in. This combination of external and internal conflicts would prove popular with Spider Man’s target audience, teenage males.

Peter Parker had bills to pay, classes to study for and girls to impress. He hurt, bled, wisecracked, and, at times, felt terribly alone.

Just like you.

Don’t detonate the drama all at once. Start your story by giving your protagonists something small to overcome. This could be a missed appointment, a speeding ticket or perhaps a false alarm.

For Peter Parker it was unpopularity and facing the school bully.

Next, give your hero some breathing room just before you ratchet up the drama. Give them a gift, and then take it away. Let your main character think they’re getting a promotion before they get fired, come home on their anniversary to another person in their bed, or have the BIG deal that will change everything crumble at the final moment.

Shortly after Peter is bitten by the spider and given this incredible gift, his uncle Ben is murdered. Murdered as an indirect result of Peter using his powers for selfish reasons, no less! How about some guilt to add to your plate full o’ conflict?

Love your characters, but don’t be afraid to punish them.

Love your characters, but don’t be afraid to punish them. Beat them up, run them through the emotional wringer, visit things unto them which you wouldn‘t wish on your worst enemy. But draw your reader into the human side of their pain and you will be building a bridge between the words on the page and the human experience inside the soul of you reader.

If it ever seems as though the tension might be too much, feel free to add a little more—so long as you’re making it believable and it helps the story.

The cheating spouse isn’t sorry and the man never gets his job back.

Uncle Ben doesn’t rise from the grave.

And sometimes the hero dies. That’s fine, so long as you have found a way to resolve the conflict.

Just be sure not to betray your reader with a simple solution. Resolution will come, but it should be a twisted road to get there. You are both the engineer of your hero’s life and the reader’s experience.

Learn to punish the one and you will please the other.

5 Tips to Create Good Conflict

  1. Make your readers care about the protagonist. Make this person someone they can relate to on some level.
  2. Introduce the conflict early. You don’t have to spell the whole thing out on page 2, but plant some seeds of what’s to come. If you wait too long, you lessen the impact and believability of what follows.
  3. If your conflict is coming from a bad guy, make your readers understand the antagonist’s motives. It’s not enough to introduce the villain. Today’s readers want a peek inside the minds of evil. They want to know what makes the bad guy tick. Show them.
  4. Make your readers care about the antagonist! If you can find a way to make them care about our hero‘s nemesis, or perhaps even feel a bit torn about their allegiances, you can deliver a complex and powerful story.
  5. Deliver the goods. If you’re going to start a conflict, you’d better resolve it. If you fail to do so in a satisfying manner, then you are breaking the bond of trust with your reader.

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You are a writer, but do you sometimes find it hard to write?

One of my best friends is a chef. You wouldn’t believe how often he has a hard time deciding what’s for dinner.

This is normal. Whatever your occupation, you are subject to the same fatigue as anyone. Dentists get tired of looking at teeth, plumbers get tired of pipes and writers, well no matter how much you might love language, sometimes you’re probably going to get a bit tired of slinging words.

The amazing thing is, once you crash through that inertia, your brain will be there to delight and surprise you. There is nothing better for a writer trying to smash their writer’s block than to simply start writing. One of the best pieces of writing advice I ever read was simply, Give yourself permission to write a first draft.

Your first draft can be terrible and it doesn’t have to make sense. It’s primary function is to get your fingers and brain working together.

Once you start writing, magic happens.

This is the idea behind the Creative Copy Challenge, our six-week-old site that has been doing gangbusters in the community aspect. We would love to bring some of that creative energy to the Inkwell.

We plan on publishing one prompt per week to get our writers writing as well as helping us to know our community a little better. We did this a couple of times last year with interesting results. We don’t intend for this to replace Creative Copy Challenge, but to rather work in a slightly different manner, exercising different creative muscles.

Prompts will be either visual or written. Both David and I will contribute our own entries in the comment section.

Here is the first prompt:

“She placed the box on the sidewalk, looked over her shoulder, and then slowly walked away.”

We look forward to reading what each of you come up with. Write a short paragraph or a full fledged short story, whatever you want.

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