Building A Perfect Story: Interview With Larry Brooks

Larry Brooks of StoryFix was interviewed yesterday at Advanced Fiction Writing about his latest book, Story Engineering and the art of building the perfect story.

Randy Ingermanson talked with Larry about several concepts outlined in his book, a must-read for any writer looking to take their story to the next level.

Randy:  One of your concepts on Story Structure that was new to me was your idea of “pinch points.” What is a pinch point and why does a story need one?

Larry: It’s from the movies, and it works great in novels. The driving source of tension in a story is the presence, the pressure, of an antagonistic force. We meet or sense that force early, we experience it at Plot Point One, and then it’s up to the author as to how we experience or see this antagonist. But we must see it and feel it again, and more than once. Pinch points are, very simply, when the antagonist comes to center stage, in context to what it/they want to achieve and how it opposes and threatens the hero and her/his quest. In a story about cancer, the cancer would rear its ugly head at the pinch points in a way that reminds us what’s at stake, what’s at risk and what the hero must conquer. The optimal locations are the 3/8th and 5/8ths points in the story, at a minimum, but more can be better, too. Because those moments often occur frequently, we can easily miss them as pinch points. But that doesn’t change the power of them when they are inserted in the right place, even if they are in nearly every scene otherwise.

Read the whole interview here.

Publisher Harper Collins Not Backing Down

Harper Collins is not backing down from its cap on e-book lending to 26 per license, according to a post at MobyLives, which has been covering the story and how the publisher’s actions have angered librarians who are already dealing with budget cuts.

The publisher’s decision to limit library lending (even while some other publishers completely restrict eBook lending via libraries) has caused a backlash among some librarians and has even called for a boycott.

Yesterday HarperCollins issued an “open letter” to librarians saying that, well, it wasn’t going to back down. According to the statement,

“We spent many months examining the issues before making this change. We talked to agents and distributors, had discussions with librarians, and participated in the Library Journal e-book Summit and other conferences. Twenty-six circulations can provide a year of availability for titles with the highest demand, and much longer for other titles and core backlist. If a library decides to repurchase an e-book later in the book’s life, the price will be significantly lower as it will be pegged to a paperback price point. Our hope is to make the cost per circulation for e-books less than that of the corresponding physical book. In fact, the digital list price is generally 20% lower than the print version, and sold to distributors at a discount.

We invite libraries and library distributors to partner with us as we move forward with these new policies.”

Read the entire post at MobyLives.

Self Publishing Reviews: When The Mob Attacks

So, you’ve finally gotten your book published and its on the market for review. Awesome!

Well, until the hateful reviews come in from mean spirited people who are looking to knock you down a peg or four.

Self Publishing Review has a post from Vicki Hopkins on her recent experiences with the lynch mob reviewer mentality at Amazon and GoodReads.

What are authors looking for in a review? Well, I’ll give you my two cents worth. I want to know how my story touched you as an individual. Tell me whether you thought it was a good plot. Let me know if you think my characters and dialogue were right on or not. Write about how the story either moved you or failed to move you and tell me why. Give me tips on how I could make things better, or recommend me to others if I’ve made your day.

What do authors not want from a review? Hateful comments or one stars with no comments from mean people with chips on their shoulders or grudges because they’re prejudice against self-published authors. Mean spirited reviews from people who trash your work, who clearly haven’t read it because their reviews are contrary to the content of the book itself. Being targeted when you piss off a reader, because you hold views contrary to their own.

Read the whole post at SPR.

How To Use Your Writing Blog To Brand

It’s amazing how many great writers have such awful blogs. From poor design to ill-conceived content, some writers’ blogs look like little more than an afterthoughts because someone told them they needed to have a blog.

Blogging may seem easy, especially to writers who are naturally gifted at creating content.

But blogging it its own science – a mix of content, marketing, and community which can be a tough nut to crack.

Fortunately, Judy Dunn of CatsEyeWriter has a great guest post at StoryFix which shows you how to use a blog to build your brand, rather than scare people away.

When I teach blogging workshops to aspiring authors, eyes always glaze over when I get to the part about building an author brand. My students think of consumer brainwashing, of taglines and commercials— Coke (“refreshing”) and Apple (“Think different”).

“I don’t need a brand,” they say. “I’m not a ‘product.’”

Don’t confuse branding with advertising slogans.

Branding is simply the feeling you want your readers to experience when they see your name—the emotional connection you want them to feel with you as an author.

And a blog is a perfect stage upon which to build your author’s brand.

This is a must-read blog for any writer with a blog. Read the whole post at StoryFix.

Want To Publish A Book? Listen Up.

Want to publish your own book? Hit the book store.

Publisher’s Weekly has an article by Josie Leavitt advising would-be authors on ways they can utilize their local bookstores to find publishing success.

Use your bookstore as a resource. Go to as many author events as you can. They’re free and they provide a wonderful chance to meet and speak with successful authors and find out their path to getting published.

See all of Josie’s tips at Publishers Weekly.

What Does Amanda Hocking’s Success Mean To Self Publishing?

Novelr has a piece on Amanda Hocking‘s amazing success on Kindle and how she’s doing so well that no mainstream publisher can offer her anything better than her current deal – she gets 70 percent of all her e-book sales.

Amanda Hocking is 26* years old. She has 9 self-published books to her name, and sells 100,000+ copies of those ebooks per month. She has never been traditionally published. This is her blog. And it’s no stretch to say – at $3 per book1/70% per sale for the Kindle store – that she makes a lot of money from her monthly book sales. (Perhaps more importantly: a publisher on the private Reading2.0 mailing list has said, to effect: there is no traditional publisher in the world right now that can offer Amanda Hocking terms that are better than what she’s currently getting, right now on the Kindle store, all on her own.)

This shift in power to the writers could signal a change in self-publishing which could see more mainstream (traditionally published) authors jumping ship and making a run at selling their own work.

Read the whole story at Novelr and see what Amanda’s success could mean to the future of self-publishing.

Random House Gives In: Agrees To Publisher Pricing Model

Random House, the last major publisher to hold out from adopting the “agency pricing model” which allows publishers to set pricing of e-books while providing retailers with a 30 percent cut, has changed its tune. It’s adopting the agency model, which is lauded by some publishers and authors, but loathed by some readers because it means higher prices.

This opens the doors for Random House to join Apple’s iBook app, while also signaling an end to the lower wholesale pricing which Random House had been allowing, which allowed retailers, such as Amazon, to set the price.

Publishers have taken issue with Amazon over its low prices.

Some consumers have blamed the approach for higher e-book prices.

Five of the country’s six largest publishers switched to agency pricing last year when Apple introduced its iPad tablet. Publishers believed the iPad would sharply expand sales of e-books and challenge Amazon.com Inc.’s popular Kindle e-reader. Apple is hosting a news conference Wednesday and is expected to unveil a new version of the iPad.

Read the entire story at WSJ.

What will this mean to Amazon? According to recent reports, Random House was enjoying strong sales on Kindle, as the last major publisher to allow wholesale pricing. If prices go up, will sales go down? Will more readers shift towards smaller and indie publishers? How will it affect sales of the Kindle?

Publisher Puts Cap On Library Lending Of E-Books

As if struggling libraries didn’t have enough problems.

Publisher Harper Collins is cracking down on libraries and their lending of e-books by limiting e-book lending to 26 times per license.

MobyLives reported on the story yesterday.

Hadro reports that “Josh Marwell, President, Sales for HarperCollins, told LJ that the 26 circulation limit was arrived at after considering a number of factors, including the average lifespan of a print book, and wear and tear on circulating copies.” A statement from the publisher added, “HarperCollins is committed to the library channel. We believe this change balances the value libraries get from our titles with the need to protect our authors and ensure a presence in public libraries and the communities they serve for years to come.”

Librarians don’t agree with the decision, however.

And Sarah Houghton-Jan, Assistant Director for the San Rafael Public Library, CA, responded this way:

“Consumer market eBook vendors like Barnes & Noble and Amazon don’t let publishers get away with the amount of nonsense that we get stuck with through library eBook vendors. I fault the publishers for not realizing what a huge mistake they are making by not realizing that new formats are opportunities–not threats to be quashed.”

Read the entire story at MobyLives.

How Publishing Trends Are Changing Book Design

While it’s never been easier to self-publish your own book, preparing books for publication can still be a challenge. This is especially true if you’re printing several versions of your book – a traditional printed version, a print-on-demand version, and an e-book version (which, depending on how many places you plan to sell your e-book, could come with several variations itself).

Sherry Wachter details some of the complications in preparing your book for publication and how you should plan ahead for them, in a post at The Blood-Red Pencil today.

So what does this mean for self-publishers? If you don’t plan carefully, it can mean substantial additional pre-press and design fees. It can also mean a great deal of stress if you choose a designer who isn’t familiar with the production method you choose. Here’s a quick little list that might help.

1. If you’re planning on producing your book in multiple formats (and I really suggest you do) consider a press or print-on-demand service that can handle both your print on demand books and your Kindle book conversions. It’ll save you in designer fees, it’ll simplify your ISBN needs, and you’ll end up with a more reliable Kindle book.

Check out the rest of the list at The Blood-Red Pencil.

Kindle V. iPad: Amazon’s Newest Ad Takes Aim At Competition

Amazon is taking on the Apple iPad in its latest commercial, which not only touts the Kindle e-reader’s huuuuuuge list of available e-books, but also its long battery life, and anti-glare screen.

TechCrunch wrote about the commercial in today’s post.

One thing that is noticeable in the commercial is that all of the actors appear to be in their twenties and thirties, which shows that Amazon is clearly trying to target a younger demographic in the spot. And the tagline “The Book Lives On,” appears to be a new one.

Check out the entire post at TechCrunch.



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