Comments on: Serial and Milk: Available Darkness – Chapter Four

By: Link Love Friday | Me(me), Myself and I Edition

Link Love Friday | Me(me), Myself and I Edition — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 19:46:53 +0000

[...] It’s the first thing I do every Friday, catch up with Dave and Sean’s gripping serial fiction. This week it’s Chapter 4 of Available Darkness [...]

By: Michael

Michael — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 06:42:01 +0000

I'm loving this series and sorry for the delay in commenting. Like Janice I've been doing some casting of my own, which got me thinking about Baldwin's attitude toward the chief and small town cops in general. He sounds a lot like Marshal Sam Girard of The Fugitive, played by Tommy Lee Jones, particularly when he arrived at the train wreck and took over the case from the local sheriff. Regarding the widower/dead wife issue, since he was fiddling with his wedding band while thinking of his deceased wife, it suggests that he hasn't remarried. Therefore, it would probably be fine to say "he thought of his wife, Julia, victim 43". It's not uncommon for a person that loses a spouse (especially under tragic circumstances) to continue referring to the deceased in the present tense unless or until they remarry. Michael’s last blog post..Picture This: Day 4

By: Paisley (Paisley Thoughts)

Paisley (Paisley Thoughts) — Thu, 21 May 2009 19:44:36 +0000

I enjoyed concentrating on Baldwin. He is a strong a presence right from his first appearance. Paisley (Paisley Thoughts)’s last blog post..The Generation Gap

By: My son’s new friend — Blogger Dad

My son’s new friend — Blogger Dad — Mon, 18 May 2009 04:19:35 +0000

[...] for some scares? Chapter Four of the book I am co-writing, Available Darkness is live at Collective [...]

By: Do You Dave Ramsey?

Do You Dave Ramsey? — Sat, 16 May 2009 16:42:47 +0000

only 6 more days to my next fix...... only 6 more days to my next fix.... only six more days to my next fix.... Do You Dave Ramsey?’s last blog post..I’m Not as Broke as You Think

By: Marc - WelshScribe

Marc - WelshScribe — Fri, 15 May 2009 20:43:58 +0000

How else are the shelves meant to stay up?

By: Sean

Sean — Fri, 15 May 2009 20:16:57 +0000

Trina: Wait until next week... I'm whistling right now, you just can't hear me. Lori: That's all Dave. He's cool like that. Sean’s last blog post..The Classroom is Only a Baseline

By: Sean

Sean — Fri, 15 May 2009 20:15:58 +0000

Brackets... we don't need no steenking brackets. Sean’s last blog post..The Classroom is Only a Baseline

By: Lori Hoeck

Lori Hoeck — Fri, 15 May 2009 20:15:05 +0000

I’m like how you two are weaving the story and characters in a way that teases the reader into wanting more.

By: Sean

Sean — Fri, 15 May 2009 20:14:26 +0000

That's exactly what we're going for. Next time we'll try to catch you right in the middle of dinner. "Sorry honey," you'll say to your confused hubby as you fork clinks against the plate, "I think it's time for my Serial and Milk!" Sean’s last blog post..The Classroom is Only a Baseline