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[...] Serial and Milk: Available Darkness – Chapter Nine collectiveinkwell.com/serial-and-milk-available-darkness-chapter-nine – view page – cached (Serial and Milk: Available Darkness is a serialized horror story co-written by David Wright and Sean Platt. A new chapter appears here each Friday. If you — From the page [...]

By: Paisley (Paisley Thoughts)

Paisley (Paisley Thoughts) — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 08:08:53 +0000

At last I can catch up on reading. I'm really getting into Baldwin. I like the way you give just enough information without overloading. Paisley (Paisley Thoughts)’s last blog post..Freedom Glory Project

By: Marc

Marc — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 12:50:46 +0000

Sure but I want royalties otherwise I'm pointing them to your My Little Pony post...oh wait that won't work... "You burnt your house down looking at My Little Pony dolls!" *News reporters all fall over laughing* Marc’s last blog post..How to Create a Character | A Review

By: David Wright

David Wright — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 02:05:38 +0000

Randi - Thanks! If we had a budget, I'd hire you for our marketing! David Wright’s last blog post..Serial and Milk: Available Darkness - Chapter Nine

By: David Wright

David Wright — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 02:03:34 +0000

Trina - Thanks for the comments. Yes, both men are haunted. I like the parallels in this story - what I've hinted at and things not yet known. For this story, I did some research and talked to a few people in law enforcement to make sure the story seems to take place at least within the realm of possibility. It's not too complex, though. Someday, I'd like to do a more historical type of novel, but first I want to perfect my fiction telling voice. David Wright’s last blog post..Serial and Milk: Available Darkness - Chapter Nine

By: David Wright

David Wright — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 01:55:18 +0000

Oh yeah, we're mean like that. Originally, this chapter was going to end before the change to the hotel room, but we then added a few hundred more words. David Wright’s last blog post..Serial and Milk: Available Darkness - Chapter Nine

By: David Wright

David Wright — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 01:54:08 +0000

If you burn down the house can you just be sure to tell the news reporters what it was that had you so captivated? That would be great publicity. Thanks!

David Wright’s last blog post..Serial and Milk: Available Darkness – Chapter Nine

By: Trina

Trina — Fri, 19 Jun 2009 22:15:27 +0000

Part of my heart aches for Baldwin, but he’s poppin Percocets like Tic Tacs, and regretting past sins…hmmmm.
I’m often intrigued by back ground knowledge that writers need posess to make their work plausible. Research, gut and talent all play I role I suspect. I am still left with a fragment from Ch 8 (I believe) which struck me as brilliant – the reference to the delicate dusting off as it relates to meticulous fossil care.
Anyhow, another good week and our two main men are missing what may have made them whole, hmmm.

By: Randi

Randi — Fri, 19 Jun 2009 16:13:08 +0000

My least favorite part of this story: "TO BE CONTINUED..." Attention Lost addicts: Looking for something to drive you crazy from one week to the next? Something that makes you feel like you're Wile E. Coyote hanging from the edge of a cliff by a rapidly loosening twig? Something that will take the place of your favorite show until it reappears in 2010? Then park yourselves right here every Friday for the next installment of Available Darkness. Randi’s last blog post..Thoughts of a Twitterless Thinker

By: Rosa

Rosa — Fri, 19 Jun 2009 13:37:50 +0000

When I finished reading I was all ¨What? That`s it?? But I have to know what happens now!!!!!!¨ But then I remembered...that`s what you guys want... Rosa’s last blog post..Después de la tormenta – After the storm