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		<title>By: Twitter Trackbacks for 7 Steps to Squeaky Clean Copy [collectiveinkwell.com] on Topsy.com</title>
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		<dc:creator>Twitter Trackbacks for 7 Steps to Squeaky Clean Copy [collectiveinkwell.com] on Topsy.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Sep 2009 13:28:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 7 Steps to Squeaky Clean Copy  collectiveinkwell.com/seve-steps-to-squeaky-clean-copy &#8211; view page &#8211; cached  A writer must situate their words in a way that makes the reader feel like they are adjacent to the writer, listening to every word while never once wanting to interrupt. These seven steps can help you take your copy from crusty to clean. &#8212; From the page [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] 7 Steps to Squeaky Clean Copy  collectiveinkwell.com/seve-steps-to-squeaky-clean-copy &ndash; view page &ndash; cached  A writer must situate their words in a way that makes the reader feel like they are adjacent to the writer, listening to every word while never once wanting to interrupt. These seven steps can help you take your copy from crusty to clean. &mdash; From the page [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Shack&#8217;s Comings and Goings &#187; Sunday Wash-Up</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shack&#8217;s Comings and Goings &#187; Sunday Wash-Up</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Jun 2009 21:42:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 7 Steps to Squeaky Clean Copy “A writer must situate their words in a way that makes the reader feel like they are adjacent to the writer, listening to every word while never once wanting to interrupt. These seven steps can help you take your copy from crusty to clean.” [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] 7 Steps to Squeaky Clean Copy “A writer must situate their words in a way that makes the reader feel like they are adjacent to the writer, listening to every word while never once wanting to interrupt. These seven steps can help you take your copy from crusty to clean.” [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Twitted by edisonpaul</title>
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		<dc:creator>Twitted by edisonpaul</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2009 22:14:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Darron Barnes</title>
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		<dc:creator>Darron Barnes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 May 2009 22:21:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Stuff great Sean, there I go again! Hahaha!

Great stuff Sean, that&#039;s better. 

I will print your list and keep it as a check list to get myself in the habit before posting to my newly proposed blog. Thank you for sharing Sean.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stuff great Sean, there I go again! Hahaha!</p>
<p>Great stuff Sean, that&#8217;s better. </p>
<p>I will print your list and keep it as a check list to get myself in the habit before posting to my newly proposed blog. Thank you for sharing Sean.</p>
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		<title>By: Paul Sharville</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paul Sharville</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 May 2009 16:57:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m going to read my work aloud every time someone on the train is speaking too loudly into their mobile phone... Why shouldn&#039;t I?  I have to listen to their inane drivel; they can damn well listen to mine.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m going to read my work aloud every time someone on the train is speaking too loudly into their mobile phone&#8230; Why shouldn&#8217;t I?  I have to listen to their inane drivel; they can damn well listen to mine.</p>
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		<title>By: Paul Sharville</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paul Sharville</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 May 2009 16:55:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The first para of any piece is so often the warm-up act.  I&#039;ve lost count of the times my first para has gone, to be replaced by my second. A critical observation for writers to attend to wherever possible.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The first para of any piece is so often the warm-up act.  I&#8217;ve lost count of the times my first para has gone, to be replaced by my second. A critical observation for writers to attend to wherever possible.</p>
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		<title>By: Paul Sharville</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paul Sharville</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 May 2009 16:51:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Watch that extra &#039;o&#039; in losing ;-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Watch that extra &#8216;o&#8217; in losing <img src='http://collectiveinkwell.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Paul Sharville</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paul Sharville</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 11 May 2009 16:49:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good stuff. I might add &#039;If you&#039;ve got the time, let it incubate&#039;. Walk away from it, better still sleep on it. The clarity of revisiting copy after a break, even a short one, can be pin sharp. &#039;Yes, I still love it&#039; or &#039;OMG that really doesn&#039;t work&#039; are both valid and valuable conclusions.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good stuff. I might add &#8216;If you&#8217;ve got the time, let it incubate&#8217;. Walk away from it, better still sleep on it. The clarity of revisiting copy after a break, even a short one, can be pin sharp. &#8216;Yes, I still love it&#8217; or &#8216;OMG that really doesn&#8217;t work&#8217; are both valid and valuable conclusions.</p>
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		<title>By: Mary</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 09 May 2009 00:08:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sean, I&#039;m right there with you on every word of this post. I swear I hadn&#039;t read it when I wrote my recent Quick Guide to Revising and Editing (sorry, but I don&#039;t know how to make that a link). I particularly like points two and three. Any good writer puts their ego on a shelf when editing.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Mary’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/BeABetterWriterNow/~3/8_rouZcGFZE/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Beating the Buzz Word Fail Whale&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sean, I&#8217;m right there with you on every word of this post. I swear I hadn&#8217;t read it when I wrote my recent Quick Guide to Revising and Editing (sorry, but I don&#8217;t know how to make that a link). I particularly like points two and three. Any good writer puts their ego on a shelf when editing.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Mary’s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/BeABetterWriterNow/~3/8_rouZcGFZE/" rel="nofollow">Beating the Buzz Word Fail Whale</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Week in review &#171; Publishing Renaissance</title>
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		<dc:creator>Week in review &#171; Publishing Renaissance</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 08 May 2009 17:31:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] the serious bloggers out there: 7 Steps to Squeaky Clean Copy, at Collective Inkwell. ( &#8220;Blogging is about communication. Effective communication is [...]</description>
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