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		<title>By: The story garden Collective Inkwell &#124; Shed Kits</title>
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		<dc:creator>The story garden Collective Inkwell &#124; Shed Kits</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 May 2009 02:33:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] The story garden Collective Inkwell   Posted by root 22 hours ago (http://collectiveinkwell.com)        Plus it will shed some light on the back story to available darkness a door led to the back room which served as the storage room restroom and the marc and randi inspired me to comment from the heart as well as the mind this site is powered by wordpress a        Discuss&#160;  &#124;&#160; Bury &#124;&#160;    News &#124; the story garden collective inkwell [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Pages tagged "vampires are forever"</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 08 May 2009 00:53:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Dave and Sean</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dave and Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 03 May 2009 09:26:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Marc - Yeah, I kinda figured that. Thanks! 

-Dave</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Marc &#8211; Yeah, I kinda figured that. Thanks! </p>
<p>-Dave</p>
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		<title>By: Marc - WelshScribe</title>
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		<dc:creator>Marc - WelshScribe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 01 May 2009 10:19:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Dave; Supernatural is a great series but it&#039;s another one where you have to keep up or you&#039;re going to miss out on the &lt;em&gt;entire&lt;/em&gt; backstory.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Marc - WelshScribe’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://welshscribe.co.uk/2009/04/30/creative-writing/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Creative Writing&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Dave; Supernatural is a great series but it&#8217;s another one where you have to keep up or you&#8217;re going to miss out on the <em>entire</em> backstory.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Marc &#8211; WelshScribe’s last blog post..<a href="http://welshscribe.co.uk/2009/04/30/creative-writing/" rel="nofollow">Creative Writing</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: David Wright</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/the-story-garden/comment-page-1/#comment-311</link>
		<dc:creator>David Wright</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 01 May 2009 08:47:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Janice - Thank you for the abundance of nice words! I appreciate them all. As for jealousy, I may as well admit it when I feel it. It&#039;s the best way to counter it, I find. I have YET to see Supernatural. I&#039;ve seen bits and pieces and it looks great,  but I hate catching up late in a series. Maybe I&#039;ll watch the DVD&#039;s during the summer and catch up before next season starts. Thanks again, I&#039;ll be checking out your blog.

Paisley - Art can definitely inspire writing. I talked a bit about that in my post last week. I think the further away from a genre you practice than what inspires you, it really increases the odds of new mixtures of art. As for understanding one another, it&#039;s quite rare, indeed to find someone like that. Sean and I have gelled better than ever I would have dreamed when I first read his words last summer.

Marc - Thank you. I like your description.

Tumblemoose - Hah, on the rich agent! Thank you for the nice words. Funny you should mention the first words of this post. I gave no thought at all to how to begin the post when I wrote it. Usually, I labor over the start of any piece of writing, searching for the perfect words. Even looking at it now, I&#039;m not sure I would have chose these words had I given it more thought. But, thank you, I appreciate the compliment.

Sean - ditto, bro. 

Vered - It&#039;s definitely something you should try at least once. It&#039;s like having a kid with someone (man, I am really trying not to make this seem romantic in any way). What I mean is that if you were to produce a child on your own, you&#039;d know pretty much what it&#039;ll be like. However, when you add someone else to the mix, you get their influences, which continue to surprise you as you look at what you&#039;ve helped bring into the world.

Avital - I learned to never hold back on critiques when I worked at the newspaper. I had to leave my ego at the door and listen to what more seasoned journalists told me about my work. And they were right each and every time. Well, almost every time. At any rate, I find the only way to grow is to find someone with a critical eye whom you can bounce stuff off of. It&#039;s tough, especially when you&#039;re friends with someone, because you don&#039;t want to hurt their feelings. When Sean shows me stuff, I treat him like a pro and don&#039;t spare his feelings if I think something isn&#039;t working. I don&#039;t say, &quot;Man, you call THIS writing?!&quot; or anything like that. I just say what doesn&#039;t work and why. Fortunately, there&#039;s not much that he shows me that has serious issues, which makes it a whole lot easier.

Melissa - Thanks, I purposely avoided most vampire fiction so as not to shade this story with any influence. I want this thing to be as pure as possible, save for the influences already working on me. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on our story.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Janice &#8211; Thank you for the abundance of nice words! I appreciate them all. As for jealousy, I may as well admit it when I feel it. It&#8217;s the best way to counter it, I find. I have YET to see Supernatural. I&#8217;ve seen bits and pieces and it looks great,  but I hate catching up late in a series. Maybe I&#8217;ll watch the DVD&#8217;s during the summer and catch up before next season starts. Thanks again, I&#8217;ll be checking out your blog.</p>
<p>Paisley &#8211; Art can definitely inspire writing. I talked a bit about that in my post last week. I think the further away from a genre you practice than what inspires you, it really increases the odds of new mixtures of art. As for understanding one another, it&#8217;s quite rare, indeed to find someone like that. Sean and I have gelled better than ever I would have dreamed when I first read his words last summer.</p>
<p>Marc &#8211; Thank you. I like your description.</p>
<p>Tumblemoose &#8211; Hah, on the rich agent! Thank you for the nice words. Funny you should mention the first words of this post. I gave no thought at all to how to begin the post when I wrote it. Usually, I labor over the start of any piece of writing, searching for the perfect words. Even looking at it now, I&#8217;m not sure I would have chose these words had I given it more thought. But, thank you, I appreciate the compliment.</p>
<p>Sean &#8211; ditto, bro. </p>
<p>Vered &#8211; It&#8217;s definitely something you should try at least once. It&#8217;s like having a kid with someone (man, I am really trying not to make this seem romantic in any way). What I mean is that if you were to produce a child on your own, you&#8217;d know pretty much what it&#8217;ll be like. However, when you add someone else to the mix, you get their influences, which continue to surprise you as you look at what you&#8217;ve helped bring into the world.</p>
<p>Avital &#8211; I learned to never hold back on critiques when I worked at the newspaper. I had to leave my ego at the door and listen to what more seasoned journalists told me about my work. And they were right each and every time. Well, almost every time. At any rate, I find the only way to grow is to find someone with a critical eye whom you can bounce stuff off of. It&#8217;s tough, especially when you&#8217;re friends with someone, because you don&#8217;t want to hurt their feelings. When Sean shows me stuff, I treat him like a pro and don&#8217;t spare his feelings if I think something isn&#8217;t working. I don&#8217;t say, &#8220;Man, you call THIS writing?!&#8221; or anything like that. I just say what doesn&#8217;t work and why. Fortunately, there&#8217;s not much that he shows me that has serious issues, which makes it a whole lot easier.</p>
<p>Melissa &#8211; Thanks, I purposely avoided most vampire fiction so as not to shade this story with any influence. I want this thing to be as pure as possible, save for the influences already working on me. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on our story.</p>
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		<title>By: Melissa Donovan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Melissa Donovan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 30 Apr 2009 20:02:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, I love revisiting the stuff I wrote many years ago to see which ideas still have a heartbeat. Having just finished the Twilight series and discovering a new fascination with vampire stories, I&#039;m looking forward to reading yours.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Melissa Donovan’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/WritingForward/~3/PFAD0xGFdq4/questions-curiosity-and-writing-ideas&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Questions, Curiosity, and Writing Ideas&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, I love revisiting the stuff I wrote many years ago to see which ideas still have a heartbeat. Having just finished the Twilight series and discovering a new fascination with vampire stories, I&#8217;m looking forward to reading yours.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Melissa Donovan’s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/WritingForward/~3/PFAD0xGFdq4/questions-curiosity-and-writing-ideas" rel="nofollow">Questions, Curiosity, and Writing Ideas</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Avital</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/the-story-garden/comment-page-1/#comment-284</link>
		<dc:creator>Avital</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Apr 2009 22:54:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have a folder in my computer with story seeds that goes back to Word 5.0... I used to have great imaginative story ideas but they have never developed any further. I have never thought to collaborate with other writers, though I did show some people those unripened seeds asking for feedback which was never genuinely given.

Your collaboration obviously works like magic. So all I have to say is =&gt; &quot;If it ain&#039;t broke, don&#039;t fix it&quot; :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have a folder in my computer with story seeds that goes back to Word 5.0&#8230; I used to have great imaginative story ideas but they have never developed any further. I have never thought to collaborate with other writers, though I did show some people those unripened seeds asking for feedback which was never genuinely given.</p>
<p>Your collaboration obviously works like magic. So all I have to say is =&gt; &#8220;If it ain&#8217;t broke, don&#8217;t fix it&#8221; <img src='http://collectiveinkwell.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Vered - MomGrind</title>
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		<dc:creator>Vered - MomGrind</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Apr 2009 18:00:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Like Paisley, I&#039;ve never collaborated with another writer, but I am constantly inspired by the writings of others.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Vered - MomGrind’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://momgrind.com/2009/04/25/fear-of-rape/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Fear of Rape&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Like Paisley, I&#8217;ve never collaborated with another writer, but I am constantly inspired by the writings of others.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Vered &#8211; MomGrind’s last blog post..<a href="http://momgrind.com/2009/04/25/fear-of-rape/" rel="nofollow">Fear of Rape</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/the-story-garden/comment-page-1/#comment-281</link>
		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Apr 2009 17:42:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There&#039;s no one I&#039;d rather write fiction with. The best part about this story is that I have no idea where it&#039;s going, so I get to enjoy it as both an author and a reader. THAT is truly magical.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Sean’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://writerdad.com/writing/deep-roots-for-longer-branches/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Deeper Roots For Longer Branches: Writer Dad 2.0&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There&#8217;s no one I&#8217;d rather write fiction with. The best part about this story is that I have no idea where it&#8217;s going, so I get to enjoy it as both an author and a reader. THAT is truly magical.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Sean’s last blog post..<a href="http://writerdad.com/writing/deep-roots-for-longer-branches/" rel="nofollow">Deeper Roots For Longer Branches: Writer Dad 2.0</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Tumblemoose</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/the-story-garden/comment-page-1/#comment-277</link>
		<dc:creator>Tumblemoose</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Apr 2009 13:57:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey guys,

Very interesting.  I just got through commenting on Iain Broomes Write For Your Life blog where he has a new post  on collaboration and tips to make it happen successfully.

Yours is a nice round out, real life addition.

David, you&#039;ve got a great writing style.  I was pulled into this post from the first sentence.  It&#039;s highly likely that you and Sean will be a writing force to be reckoned with - You&#039;re going to make some agent very rich.

It will be fun to watch.

George

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Tumblemoose’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/TumblemooseProductions/~3/k7Zo_DsXdc4/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Tumblemoose Times - A writer’s newsletter&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey guys,</p>
<p>Very interesting.  I just got through commenting on Iain Broomes Write For Your Life blog where he has a new post  on collaboration and tips to make it happen successfully.</p>
<p>Yours is a nice round out, real life addition.</p>
<p>David, you&#8217;ve got a great writing style.  I was pulled into this post from the first sentence.  It&#8217;s highly likely that you and Sean will be a writing force to be reckoned with &#8211; You&#8217;re going to make some agent very rich.</p>
<p>It will be fun to watch.</p>
<p>George</p>
<p><abbr><em>Tumblemoose’s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/TumblemooseProductions/~3/k7Zo_DsXdc4/" rel="nofollow">Tumblemoose Times &#8211; A writer’s newsletter</a></em></abbr></p>
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