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		<title>By: The Word Seeker</title>
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		<dc:creator>The Word Seeker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 05 Jul 2009 17:42:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great post! This is something that any one that writes should continue to read over and over again.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;The Word Seeker’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://theechoesofmyink.blogspot.com/2009/07/what-is-paradise.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;What is Paradise?&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post! This is something that any one that writes should continue to read over and over again.</p>
<p><abbr><em>The Word Seeker’s last blog post..<a href="http://theechoesofmyink.blogspot.com/2009/07/what-is-paradise.html" rel="nofollow">What is Paradise?</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Bonnie Gray &#124; JustPeachyBabyBlog</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/writing-with-purpose/comment-page-1/#comment-1126</link>
		<dc:creator>Bonnie Gray &#124; JustPeachyBabyBlog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Jun 2009 07:21:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Word count however, doesn’t dictate your verbal decor.&quot;

I have a bit of an identity crisis, maybe a Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde situation?  I prefer the long winded wrapping of words, but a short-and-terse traffic cop is often giving out tickets along my inner highway of thoughts (right now, in fact!)

The funny thing is, if a writer is too long winded, I totally get turned off.  So, I&#039;d say a mix is perfect, depending on mood.  I agree with Tumblemoose.  The voice is what&#039;s important.  And thus, writing with purpose, as you say, is pinnacle to making a reader&#039;s worthy climb.

Thank you for this post -- it is convicting.. esp. with Hemingway&#039;s quote.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Bonnie Gray &#124; JustPeachyBabyBlog’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/JustPeachyBabyBlog/~3/NGOK4zeCFeg/does-balance-in-life-exist.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Does Balance in Life Exist?&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Word count however, doesn’t dictate your verbal decor.&#8221;</p>
<p>I have a bit of an identity crisis, maybe a Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde situation?  I prefer the long winded wrapping of words, but a short-and-terse traffic cop is often giving out tickets along my inner highway of thoughts (right now, in fact!)</p>
<p>The funny thing is, if a writer is too long winded, I totally get turned off.  So, I&#8217;d say a mix is perfect, depending on mood.  I agree with Tumblemoose.  The voice is what&#8217;s important.  And thus, writing with purpose, as you say, is pinnacle to making a reader&#8217;s worthy climb.</p>
<p>Thank you for this post &#8212; it is convicting.. esp. with Hemingway&#8217;s quote.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Bonnie Gray | JustPeachyBabyBlog’s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/JustPeachyBabyBlog/~3/NGOK4zeCFeg/does-balance-in-life-exist.html" rel="nofollow">Does Balance in Life Exist?</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Charles</title>
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		<dc:creator>Charles</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Jun 2009 07:57:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If there was a Writer Idol, I&#039;d vote for Hemingway :-)

While I might be wrong, I think most people prefer clear concise writing. At least that&#039;s what I&#039;ve been taught by copywriters.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If there was a Writer Idol, I&#8217;d vote for Hemingway <img src='http://collectiveinkwell.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>While I might be wrong, I think most people prefer clear concise writing. At least that&#8217;s what I&#8217;ve been taught by copywriters.</p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Jun 2009 13:33:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Janice: A moment of co-created sensation. I like that, Janice. A lot.

George: I do the EXACT same thing. I don&#039;t think you have to have purpose before you sit down as long as there&#039;s purpose when you finish. You just want to make sure you&#039;re being fair to the reader.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Sean’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://writerdad.com/poetry/yo-recuerdo-mi-papi-i-remember-my-papi/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Yo Recuerdo Mi Papí - I Remember My Papi&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Janice: A moment of co-created sensation. I like that, Janice. A lot.</p>
<p>George: I do the EXACT same thing. I don&#8217;t think you have to have purpose before you sit down as long as there&#8217;s purpose when you finish. You just want to make sure you&#8217;re being fair to the reader.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Sean’s last blog post..<a href="http://writerdad.com/poetry/yo-recuerdo-mi-papi-i-remember-my-papi/" rel="nofollow">Yo Recuerdo Mi Papí &#8211; I Remember My Papi</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Tumblemoose</title>
		<link>http://collectiveinkwell.com/writing-with-purpose/comment-page-1/#comment-1100</link>
		<dc:creator>Tumblemoose</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Jun 2009 08:15:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sean,

For me, it&#039;s about voice.  If the voice works for me, I can hang with long or short prose.  I find some kind of mix to be the most attractive to me.

I don&#039;t know that I always write with purpose.  Sometimes a stray thought makes it into my thick skull and I think, &quot;Ohhh, THAT would make a great post.&quot;  From there, a title often forms and then I sit down to write.  Sometimes as I&#039;m writing I&#039;ll realize that the post has morphed into something other than what I originally intended.  In those instances, I&#039;m very careful to go back and re-read several times to make certain the thought flow is coherent.

I think I&#039;m going to have to think on this one for a bit.  Thanks for the introspection inspiration, my friend.

George

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Tumblemoose’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/TumblemooseProductions/~3/XEsDBbOdwyU/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;What It Takes to Make It Writing Children’s Books&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sean,</p>
<p>For me, it&#8217;s about voice.  If the voice works for me, I can hang with long or short prose.  I find some kind of mix to be the most attractive to me.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know that I always write with purpose.  Sometimes a stray thought makes it into my thick skull and I think, &#8220;Ohhh, THAT would make a great post.&#8221;  From there, a title often forms and then I sit down to write.  Sometimes as I&#8217;m writing I&#8217;ll realize that the post has morphed into something other than what I originally intended.  In those instances, I&#8217;m very careful to go back and re-read several times to make certain the thought flow is coherent.</p>
<p>I think I&#8217;m going to have to think on this one for a bit.  Thanks for the introspection inspiration, my friend.</p>
<p>George</p>
<p><abbr><em>Tumblemoose’s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/TumblemooseProductions/~3/XEsDBbOdwyU/" rel="nofollow">What It Takes to Make It Writing Children’s Books</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Carla</title>
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		<dc:creator>Carla</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Jun 2009 01:17:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Writing with a clear, outlined purpose is the only way I can get anything down! I&#039;m not a writer by trade so its something that I struggle with at times on my blogs.  Keeping it simple is definitely something I have to keep in mind when I&#039;m writing.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Carla’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/Beyonditallnet/~3/tP4L5J8Am1M/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Father’s Day: A moment of reflection&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writing with a clear, outlined purpose is the only way I can get anything down! I&#8217;m not a writer by trade so its something that I struggle with at times on my blogs.  Keeping it simple is definitely something I have to keep in mind when I&#8217;m writing.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Carla’s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/Beyonditallnet/~3/tP4L5J8Am1M/" rel="nofollow">Father’s Day: A moment of reflection</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: janice</title>
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		<dc:creator>janice</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jun 2009 20:36:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like when writers mix it up. We don&#039;t breathe the same length of breaths all the time, and our speech rythms vary.  Good writing is choreography, music, painting, song and sculpture all expressed through words. I like my soul, my heart and my inner ear to be engaged; I get fed up if my head&#039;s expected to do all the work. Pretentious, ostentatious prose bugs the life out of me but The Old Man and the Sea made me want to pull my hair out. 

I agree with Dave but would go further; my purpose is to communicate experience, to connect, to resonate, to ignite or recreate a response in the reader. If that experience has a beginning, middle and end, fair enough. If it doesn&#039;t, I&#039;d settle for a moment of co-created sensation.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;janice’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/Sharingthejourneycouk/~3/iagEGsJl1-M/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Connected and Encouraged&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like when writers mix it up. We don&#8217;t breathe the same length of breaths all the time, and our speech rythms vary.  Good writing is choreography, music, painting, song and sculpture all expressed through words. I like my soul, my heart and my inner ear to be engaged; I get fed up if my head&#8217;s expected to do all the work. Pretentious, ostentatious prose bugs the life out of me but The Old Man and the Sea made me want to pull my hair out. </p>
<p>I agree with Dave but would go further; my purpose is to communicate experience, to connect, to resonate, to ignite or recreate a response in the reader. If that experience has a beginning, middle and end, fair enough. If it doesn&#8217;t, I&#8217;d settle for a moment of co-created sensation.</p>
<p><abbr><em>janice’s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/Sharingthejourneycouk/~3/iagEGsJl1-M/" rel="nofollow">Connected and Encouraged</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Sean</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jun 2009 14:50:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Bud: Yes, exactly. : &gt; )

3rd grade?!?! See, that right there, that&#039;s why you and I are laughing at the school system.

Cath: Me too. Ideas need clear communication, not excess syllables. 

Dave: I agree entirely, with both statements. 

Marc: My bad. I&#039;ve no idea why it posted as Dave, but it probably has something to do with my mild, occasional idiocy.

Lisa: They really do, I&#039;ve had a post that&#039;s been on the back burner forever for Writer Dad about that very topic. Maybe I&#039;ll get to it today. It would be fitting.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bud: Yes, exactly. : &gt; )</p>
<p>3rd grade?!?! See, that right there, that&#8217;s why you and I are laughing at the school system.</p>
<p>Cath: Me too. Ideas need clear communication, not excess syllables. </p>
<p>Dave: I agree entirely, with both statements. </p>
<p>Marc: My bad. I&#8217;ve no idea why it posted as Dave, but it probably has something to do with my mild, occasional idiocy.</p>
<p>Lisa: They really do, I&#8217;ve had a post that&#8217;s been on the back burner forever for Writer Dad about that very topic. Maybe I&#8217;ll get to it today. It would be fitting.</p>
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		<title>By: LisaNewton</title>
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		<dc:creator>LisaNewton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jun 2009 12:40:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I prefer short sentences, but when needed, long will do.  It&#039;s funny that the writing lessons learned in elementary school hold true for life.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;LisaNewton’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/travelinlocal/~3/dYujW0MDe_g/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;We Built this City&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I prefer short sentences, but when needed, long will do.  It&#8217;s funny that the writing lessons learned in elementary school hold true for life.</p>
<p><abbr><em>LisaNewton’s last blog post..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/travelinlocal/~3/dYujW0MDe_g/" rel="nofollow">We Built this City</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Marc</title>
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		<dc:creator>Marc</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Jun 2009 09:44:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Heh I thought it was Sean&#039;s writing but I was thrown off by the author at the top of the post, plus the two of you are definitely influencing each other&#039;s writing - in a good way.

I&#039;m a Hemingway-style fan myself. Power in simplicity.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Marc’s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://welshscribe.co.uk/2009/06/23/seo-keyword-research/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;SEO 101.1 Keyword Research&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heh I thought it was Sean&#8217;s writing but I was thrown off by the author at the top of the post, plus the two of you are definitely influencing each other&#8217;s writing &#8211; in a good way.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m a Hemingway-style fan myself. Power in simplicity.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Marc’s last blog post..<a href="http://welshscribe.co.uk/2009/06/23/seo-keyword-research/" rel="nofollow">SEO 101.1 Keyword Research</a></em></abbr></p>
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